Running Haiku

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Nellers
Nellers
May 2013
7:06pm, 10 May 2013
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Nellers
Legs hurt after Half
Marathon. It’s your own fault.
Should have trained harder, fool.

Feelings of great joy!
Running is freedom bought cheap.
Sad my wings are clipped

Over to you, you creative bunch. I'm sure you can do better.
old mum
old mum
May 2013
7:08pm, 10 May 2013
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old mum
I love Haiku greatly
I am however shit at them
Over to you, smart arse.
Nellers
Nellers
May 2013
7:15pm, 10 May 2013
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Nellers
Form is five-six-five
syllables per line or it's
not a haiku, dear
Nellers
Nellers
May 2013
7:19pm, 10 May 2013
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Nellers
The sun is shining
Weather is perfect to run
Still, beer and sofa!
HellsBells
HellsBells
May 2013
7:20pm, 10 May 2013
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HellsBells
Work is very shit
Running is much better
But I have to work
Nellers
Nellers
May 2013
7:21pm, 10 May 2013
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Nellers
:-)
Weean
Weean
May 2013
7:56pm, 10 May 2013
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Weean
I never like pomes
especially not ones
with silly rules, yeah?

Sorry, need to work on the running aspect. Story of my life...
Weean
Weean
May 2013
8:29pm, 10 May 2013
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Weean
Oi, Nellers. shouldn't that be five-SEVEN-five?

I've made a mockery of the haiku form now (can everyone just pretend I wrote "especially not THE ones"? ta muchly).
Nellers
Nellers
May 2013
8:41pm, 10 May 2013
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Nellers
Rumbled! Yes it should be 5-7-5.
Pestomum
Pestomum
May 2013
8:50pm, 10 May 2013
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Pestomum
If you really do haiku there need to be two parts; two contrasting sections, and mention of the seasons or nature.

I did one for a blog once :-)

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