The Poetry Wire - Going From Bard To Verse

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Feb 2020
12:55pm, 8 Feb 2020
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LindsD piemate
Nice
Feb 2020
2:35pm, 8 Feb 2020
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Diogenes
Robert Frost is another of my favourite poets. Here’s one about him:

Feb 2020
9:30pm, 9 Feb 2020
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Peregrinator
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Feb 2020
10:17am, 13 Feb 2020
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Diogenes
The Sand Man

A man half-drowned in sand
A supplicant to the sky
Issues up a prayer
A frail zephyr
Fading before the sun
Under which an angel and a raven roost
eyes closed.

The man half-drowned remains
Oblivious strangers leave in darkness
and suffocation comes
From above and below
As the ocean overwhelms
Another grain of sand
As it must them all.
Feb 2020
11:57am, 13 Feb 2020
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Diogenes
My Hope Is Grey

This morning my hope is grey
Slicked down, subdued
A spit-wiped strand
Secured beneath a hat.

But yes, hope remains
Wardrobe-kept for brighter times
A crimson splash that has no place
On such a sullen day.
Apr 2020
10:03am, 23 Apr 2020
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Diogenes
This one came to mind today. I found it quite restful. I also thought of Linds when reading this line ' “Nobody can’t stop ’ee. It’s a footpath, right enough...'

Lob
BY EDWARD THOMAS

At hawthorn-time in Wiltshire travelling
In search of something chance would never bring,
An old man’s face, by life and weather cut
And coloured,—rough, brown, sweet as any nut,—
A land face, sea-blue-eyed,—hung in my mind
When I had left him many a mile behind.
All he said was: “Nobody can’t stop ’ee. It’s
A footpath, right enough. You see those bits
Of mounds—that’s where they opened up the barrows
Sixty years since, while I was scaring sparrows.
They thought as there was something to find there,
But couldn’t find it, by digging, anywhere.”

To turn back then and seek him, where was the use?
There were three Manningfords,—Abbots, Bohun, and Bruce:
And whether Alton, not Manningford, it was,
My memory could not decide, because
There was both Alton Barnes and Alton Priors.
All had their churches, graveyards, farms, and byres,
Lurking to one side up the paths and lanes,
Seldom well seen except by aeroplanes;
And when bells rang, or pigs squealed, or cocks crowed,
Then only heard. Ages ago the road
Approached. The people stood and looked and turned.
Nor asked it to come nearer, nor yet learned
To move out there and dwell in all men’s dust.
And yet withal they shot the weathercock, just
Because ’twas he crowed out of tune, they said:
So now the copper weathercock is dead.
If they had reaped their dandelions and sold
Them fairly, they could have afforded gold.

Many years passed, and I went back again
Among those villages, and looked for men
Who might have known my ancient. He himself
Had long been dead or laid upon the shelf,
I thought. One man I asked about him roared
At my description: “’Tis old Bottlesford
He means, Bill.” But another said: “Of course,
It was Jack Button up at the White Horse.
He’s dead, sir, these three years.” This lasted till
A girl proposed Walker of Walker’s Hill,
“Old Adam Walker. Adam's Point you’ll see
Marked on the maps.”

“That was her roguery,”
The next man said. He was a squire’s son
Who loved wild bird and beast, and dog and gun
For killing them. He had loved them from his birth,
One with another, as he loved the earth.
“The man may be like Button, or Walker, or
Like Bottlesford, that you want, but far more
He sounds like one I saw when I was a child.
I could almost swear to him. The man was wild
And wandered. His home was where he was free.
Everybody has met one such man as he.
Does he keep clear old paths that no one uses
But once a lifetime when he loves or muses?
He is English as this gate, these flowers, this mire.
And when at eight years old Lob-lie-by-the-fire
Came in my books, this was the man I saw.
He has been in England as long as dove and daw,
Calling the wild cherry tree the merry tree,
The rose campion Bridget-in-her-bravery;
And in a tender mood he, as I guess,
Christened one flower Love-in-idleness,
And while he walked from Exeter to Leeds
One April called all cuckoo-flowers Milkmaids.
From him old herbal Gerard learnt, as a boy,
To name wild clematis the Traveller’s-joy.
Our blackbirds sang no English till his ear
Told him they called his Jan Toy ‘Pretty dear.’
(She was Jan Toy the Lucky, who, having lost
A shilling, and found a penny loaf, rejoiced.)
For reasons of his own to him the wren
Is Jenny Pooter. Before all other men
’Twas he first called the Hog’s Back the Hog’s Back.
That Mother Dunch’s Buttocks should not lack
Their name was his care. He too could explain
Totteridge and Totterdown and Juggler’s Lane:
He knows, if anyone. Why Tumbling Bay,
Inland in Kent, is called so, he might say.
“But little he says compared with what he does.
If ever a sage troubles him he will buzz
Like a beehive to conclude the tedious fray:
And the sage, who knows all languages, runs away.
Yet Lob has thirteen hundred names for a fool,
And though he never could spare time for school
To unteach what the fox so well expressed,
On biting the cock’s head off,—Quietness is best,—
He can talk quite as well as anyone
After his thinking is forgot and done.
He first of all told someone else’s wife,
For a farthing she’d skin a flint and spoil a knife
Worth sixpence skinning it. She heard him speak:
‘She had a face as long as a wet week’
Said he, telling the tale in after years.
With blue smock and with gold rings in his ears,
Sometimes he is a pedlar, not too poor
To keep his wit. This is tall Tom that bore
The logs in, and with Shakespeare in the hall
Once talked, when icicles hung by the wall.
As Herne the Hunter he has known hard times.
On sleepless nights he made up weather rhymes
Which others spoilt. And, Hob being then his name,
He kept the hog that thought the butcher came
To bring his breakfast ‘You thought wrong,’ said Hob.
When there were kings in Kent this very Lob,
Whose sheep grew fat and he himself grew merry,
Wedded the king’s daughter of Canterbury;
For he alone, unlike squire, lord, and king,
Watched a night by her without slumbering;
He kept both waking. When he was but a lad
He won a rich man’s heiress, deaf, dumb, and sad,
By rousing her to laugh at him. He carried
His donkey on his back. So they were married.
And while he was a little cobbler’s boy
He tricked the giant coming to destroy
Shrewsbury by flood. ‘And how far is it yet?’
The giant asked in passing. ‘I forget;
But see these shoes I‘ve worn out on the road
And we’re not there yet.’ He emptied out his load
Of shoes for mending. The giant let fall from his spade
The earth for damming Severn, and thus made
The Wrekin hill; and little Ercall hill
Rose where the giant scraped his boots. While still
So young, our Jack was chief of Gotham’s sages.
But long before he could have been wise, ages
Earlier than this, while he grew thick and strong
And ate his bacon, or, at times, sang a song
And merely smelt it, as Jack the giant-killer
He made a name. He too ground up the miller,
The Yorkshireman who ground men’s bones for flour.

“Do you believe Jack dead before his hour?
Or that his name is Walker, or Bottlesford,
Or Button, a mere clown, or squire, or lord?
The man you saw,—Lob-lie-by-the-fire, Jack Cade,
Jack Smith, Jack Moon, poor Jack of every trade,
Young Jack, or old Jack, or Jack What-d’ye-call,
Jack-in-the-hedge, or Robin-run-by-the-wall,
Robin Hood, Ragged Robin, lazy Bob,
One of the lords of No Man’s Land, good Lob,—
Although he was seen dying at Waterloo,
Hastings, Agincourt, and Sedgemoor too,—
Lives yet. He never will admit he is dead
Till millers cease to grind men’s bones for bread,
Not till our weathercock crows once again
And I remove my house out of the lane
On to the road.” With this he disappeared
In hazel and thorn tangled with old-man’s-beard.
But one glimpse of his back, as there he stood,
Choosing his way, proved him of old Jack’s blood,
Young Jack perhaps, and now a Wiltshireman
As he has oft been since his days began.
Apr 2020
11:07am, 23 Apr 2020
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LindsD
That's really lovely. Thanks. It reminded me of my Dad. When asked what he wanted to be when he grew up, he said: a tramp. ANd that was what he meant. He was a city boy who learnt to love the country when evacuated.
Apr 2020
11:42am, 23 Apr 2020
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Alice the Camel
All places I'm very familiar with. Except it's now spelt Bohune. What a great piece of writing.
Apr 2020
12:37pm, 25 Apr 2020
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Peregrinator
With Edward Thomas, he started writing prose, that came to read more, and more, like poetry. Until at last he just wrote poetry.
May 2020
9:01am, 24 May 2020
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Diogenes
An a update from Brian Bilston

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